"Twelve
Steps Writing Exercise : Day
8 -
Rewrite a
fairy tale from the bad guy’s point of view.”
Why?
I know – I KNOW – I'm coming across
like a serious grump with an attitude problem with each and every one
of these exercises but the problem I have is this : there is no
context to them at all. Why?
Why would I rewrite ANYTHING, let alone
a fairy tale from the bad guy's point of view? What does the writer
GET from these exercises except a writing exercise? They don't tie
together, and the longer I'm spending on them, the less interest I
have in utilising them as they are not accumulating into any kind of
sensible wisdom. More and more I feel that they're getting in the
way.
Now, I know that this exercise is cheap
– it comes straight from the Gregory McGuire “Wicked” novels,
where he posits the world of Oz from the point of view of the
witches. It's a novelty exercise. It's not a very clever or thrilling
novelty ( which would account for both Wicked's popularity, and the
fact that it's a billion dollar-raking musical ).
In fact, this is a trend that is
currently over-taking Hollywood, who are making all kinds of
reverse-flip movies, from the upcoming Malificent to the
previously released Warm Bodies, which comes from the point of
view of a hunky zombie. Wreck it Ralph is an amusing if
overlong CGI flick told from the point of view of the
not-so-villinous once you get to know him, computer game villain. The
popular television programme Dexter was told from the point of
view of a serial killer. But you know, one with morals. Of course a
lot of YA literature comes from the point of view of traditional
villains such as Vampires, Werewolves, and I don't know, Dentists and
Chiropractors.
It's not a new trick. But it's one that
has a very peculiar ideology, and a generally cowardly approach
because, hey, we want viewers/readers/listeners etc.
Almost every single Scorcese movie,
from Taxi Driver through Goodfellas, Casino and The Departed, deal
with villains and gangsters, from their point of view. Although to be
fair to The Departed it is very clear on whose side it morally falls,
that of the troubled but decent cop played by Leonardo De Caprio.
Hollywood in fact has long been
fascinated by telling stories from the villain's point of view and
making broad-stroke attempts to humanise them. From true classics
such as Citizen Kane to the hilariously misguided attempts to
humanise Darth Vader in the Star Wars prequels, their main narrative
thrust is the destruction of humanity into evil, from good to
villainous by way of character arc and justification, whilst somehow
showing the humanity of the villains all the same. The hideous and
hideously popular Breaking Bad chose to believe it was telling the
character arc of a good man turned villain, rather than portraying
the sometimes awful misdeeds of a classic – but hey, humanised -
villain.
I'm not sure I WANT to humanise the
villains, certainly not in drama.
The point of doing this of course is to
allow an audience empathy. But by refusing to demonise villains what
is left by way of antagonist? How are we supposed to will the hero
on, if the villain is “only human”? Generally, comic books and
comic book movies used to get away with this by pumping up the hero,
and the villain, to superhuman proportions. Now, more and more, we're
seeing villains, even in comic book movies being humanised and
therefore often robbed of menace. What is wrong with having a villain
in a piece of fiction? When did the camp and thrilling Bond villain
become the morally dull and lifeless Two Face in The Dark Knight? ( Batman has a very interesting set of villains, who border on the camp yet genuinely delve into the concept of human duality - they are amongst the most psychologically interesting "villain" characters out there, but they are always presented first and foremost as VILLAINS, as antagonists ).
So what is a “villain” anyway? As
classified by The Free Dictionary:
1.A wicked or evil person; a scoundrel;
a cruelly malicious person who is involved in or devoted to
wickedness or crime; scoundrel.
In real life - Hitler. Osama Bin Laden.
A rapist. A child abuser. A cheater. A liar. Someone who hits and
runs. A murderer. An american president ( not saying which one ). A
british prime minister ( too many to name ). A home-wrecker.
In fiction – Darth Vader, The Alien,
Khan, Freddy Krueger, The Big Bad Wolf.
2.A dramatic or fictional character who
is typically at odds with the hero.
This one is important, and I'll come
back to this throughout. But note the concept that, at it's heart in this
instance, the concept of "villainy" is dramatic, or fictional.
So the purpose of a villain, certainly
in dramatic terms, is to create an antagonist to the hero. To create
someone or something that is at odds with the perceived protagonist
of the piece. By turning convention on its head, and writing from the
point of view of the “villain” you're attempting a subversion,
you're creating a hero of the villain, and a villain of the hero.
When done correctly, with a core moral of it's own, this can
be thrilling. Wicked does not do it correctly. This is as camp as a
Bond villain without and of the subversive thrills. But many, from
Roald Dahl to Neil Gaiman, from Orson Welles to Paul Schaefer, have
achieved it.
Shakespeare certainly knew the value of
a strong and merciless villain; yes, we attribute human frailty to
these characters as readers and performers but they are, nonetheless
clearly villains. We like to
retroactively filter some of Shakespeare's bigotry toward minorities
by stating that he humanised his villains where he didn't. The
Merchant of Venice for example : his views of Jewish
people are
pretty gobsmacking, though we now like to point at the “if you
prick us do we not bleed” speech to justify his humanising this
“base villain.” In fact, Shylock's
is a manipulative speech, entirely in keeping with his villainous
character. He loses of
course, in the end and we are
not meant to sympathise with him
when this happens.
Yet he is the most colourfully written character of the piece, which
is why we tend to remember him and
not whats-his- name, the protagonist.
Not because Shakespeare sympathises with him, not necessarily, but
because Shakespeare wanted him to be as ugly, as feral, and as
villainous
as possible. To be the worst
kind of antagonist for his main characters. As
such, he probably over thought him a little, creating someone overtly
theatrical that is more than
just a jewish stereotype but, it can certainly be argued, is governed
by his race.
Was he right in his
anti-semitic views? Of course not. But history allows him to get
away with it because he is, after all, an artist – and artists
necessarily buck political correctness ( even if the concept did not
exist in Shakespearean times! ) in ways we normal folks are not allowed. As morally reprehensible as his views
may seem, much in the way we still forgive Birth of a Nation for it's
wholly unpleasant racism, we can in one breath say that Shakespeare's
works are both timeless in theme, and of it's time in nature.
Hypocritical?
Sure.
But imagine a
Wicked style re-invention of Shylock, taking out the anti-semitic
overtones in favour of a morally bland, but politically correct
reading. Could be interesting, right? Right? Not a chance. Get rid of
Shylock's central, vile character, and all your left with is a
non-sequitur, a dull, boring character designed not to alienate its
audience but “reflect” it.
One of my favourite
plays is Tom Stoppard's “Rozencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead”,
which takes two minor, and often erased characters from Hamlet, and
tells the story from their point of view. However, rather than
imagining what's going on in between the plot holes of Hamlet,
Stoppard tells an increasingly wicked, existential tale, using these
two blankly written characters to hang his musings on. He can do
this because these characters are non-existant, thay are only in
Hamlet as plot devices and convenience. So Stoppard can essentially
pour his own voice into theirs and say what he wants.
Try and do it with
Shylock however, and what you're left with is a preening
justification EITHER for anti-semitism ( let's face it, a true bigot
can do far worse than Shakspeare when it comes to smearing Jews ) or
for the ugly actions of an ugly man to make some trite point or
other. Yes, of course, one can do it ironically – tell the story
straight from his point of view but – with some clever writing –
mock his character through satire. Yet Shakespeare already managed
this feat by telling the story the way he chose to ( arguably from
Shylock's point of view, but in truth it shows all characters and
actions to gain a greater understanding of consequence ), so again to
my original question?
Why bother
rewriting something and changing the existing viewpoint?
The purpose of a
villain is to be dramatically vile. To give contour to the hero and
tension for the audience. Done right, or played by Gary Oldman, the
villain can become a thrilling anti-hero.
That doesn't mean you want
to see him win, necessarily, just that it's interesting seeing him
try. The more thrilling a villain, the more obstacle he is for the
hero to overcome, the more exciting and satisfying it is when he
wins. Which is why the aforementioned Avengers movies – for one
example – singularly fail to tell their arcs in an interesting way.
They don't want to run the risk of alienating an audience, and they
don't want to make their villains vile, they don't want to offend or
shock or have a single dislikeable character in their stock.
The
fact is, this exercise is expecting me to write a sympathetic and
therefore subversive viewpoint of the villain. It's
playing safe, too, to ask me to rewrite a fairytale. I can tell you
the story of The Big Bad Wolf's poverty leading him to the gutter and
ultimately becoming
a monstrous transvestite
to fend off death. But that takes away from the original's deeply
sexual morals, and just makes it kind of whimsical (
or I can make it about bestiality or the evils of homosexuality if
you'd prefer? )
What about someone
like Rumplestiltskin? Is he also a metaphor for the Jew? Could we
tell the story from his point of view, give him a sympathy missing
from every version of Rapunzel ( even the Warrick Davis horror movie
)? Describe what it's like to be a little person?
A fairytale, generally speaking has a
moral at it's centre, a very specific metaphor at the core of it's
storytelling. All I'm doing then, by rewriting it, is attempting to
be clever for the sake of being clever. Attempting to be
controversial. Hell, I can do that in my sleep, yo.
Now, if we wanted to shake things up, I
could choose to tell the story from the point of view of a serial
rapist, or go for Hollywood convention and tell the story from the
point of view of a humanised pedophile. How would that be for
subversive? If we REALLY want to delve into villainy for this
exercise, let's go DARK! Shocking! Let's tell the story from the
point of view of one of the 911 pilots! ( Incidentally, a major
mistake in the otherwise sublime United 93 was to tell elements of
the story from the point of view of the pilots, yet allow the
passengers to cathartically – and it must be said erroneously –
snap one the hijacker's necks, sending completely mixed messages as
to the film-makers ultimate intentions in making this movie ).
Here's an interesting sidenote – not so
long ago there was a strange Hollywood trend in creating films from
the point of view of the pedophile. Films such as Happiness, L.I.E.,
American Beauty, The Woodsman, Leon, Kids and Bully ( more so the latter
two because the filmmaker Harmony Korine seems to have a disturbing
affinity for young flesh ) and to a lesser degree Hard Candy, all
bizarrely sought to “humanise” as opposed to demonise the
pedophile, though to what end – other than artistic shock value and
subversity – it's not yet truly clear. Hollywood, in fact has a
strange affinity FOR pedophiles, in particular in it's refusal to
vilify child-rapist Roman Polanski, and pedophile Woody Allen, even
dating back as far as its fascination with child actors such as
Shirley Temple, and further back to artists who had a predaliction
for children ( see also Chaplin ). Seeking to humanise people who
society as a whole have chosen to demonise is a particular trick
artists use ( see also strangely sympathetic Hitler pic, Downfall )
but it becomes hard to understand why anyone would want to create
heroes, or anti-heros of someone society has deemed so particularly
vile. It's also interesting to note that most movie pedophiles are
fictional. Where are our biopics on Gary Glitter or Jonathon King?
In reality, pedophiles have been used
as the tabloid uber-villain and its interesting to note just how
vilified these people are by vast mobs of people. There are many
stories floating around of mobs and riots of people attacking
pedophiles or wrongfully alienating people whose job title starts
with “pedo”. This of course is another discussion, but it does
point to the fact that, like it or loathe it, people need
villains, are
willing to be dramatic in their desires,
and to tell a story therefore from the villain's point of view smacks
not of seeking to humanise the demon ( pedophiles after all are
clearly
human, behaviour aside, which is why we struggle to understand their
actions ) but of being shocking, or controversial, for the sake of
it. In fact, what it also points toward is a level of contempt that
these artists
have for “real” people, for common people. They
would rather mock, attack, or satirise the actions of a mob, than
look to the reasons behind them. Personally
I don't like seeing those mobs of people act as though they are
heroes on a righteous quest,
but I understand their actions far more readily than those of the
pedophile they are demonising.
So why, therefore, is that any
better than creating a true villain as the antagonist to your hero?
And who, if the pedophile is your antagonist, is your villain?
Is it the mob mentality? Are we the villains because we vilify the
actions of these people? In truth, generally speaking, these movies
use at their heart the tension of conflict within the pedophile
themselves. Will they, won't they. They are both antagonist and
protagonist. If they overcome their “disease” they are heroes. If
they do not, they become “the villain.” What is in it for the
audience then, while we are watching this queasily whimsical
sentimentality? Cake. Which
we can eat.
At the end of the day, I'm not going to
do this exercise because I honestly think it's stupid. I don't want
to waste my time retelling a pre-existing story from the point of
view of it's main antagonist. It's a child's exercise in empathy. And
it doesn't achieve anything.
I think there are reasons for villains
to exist, and further for people to vilify other humans. If I am to
create a villain for a piece of work, I'll do so, and will do so with
a particular ideal or theme in mind. Perhaps – as we have already
established – it makes me less of an artist to refuse to be
attracted to “the dark side” of humanity, to want to tell a story
from the point of view of a villain as opposed to a hero. I don't
care.
“Twelve
Do's
and Don'ts
in blogging : Number eight, don't Limit
your word count.
If
you have something to say, say it. Readers (and search engines)
prefer to get meatier pieces (500 words or more) to make clicking
through worth their time. This doesn’t mean you can’t feature
shorter pieces or that you should ramble on just to meet a word
count, but don’t be afraid to break down antiquated perceptions
that blogs need to be short. When the time is right, go long.”
HA!!!!
To all those people who were having a go at the length of my blogs I
say unto thee this : Size DOES matter!
“Twelve
Steps of Addiction, step 8 : Made
direct amends to such people wherever possible, except when to do so
would injure them or others.”
Um
– to all those people who were having a go at the length of my
blogs and to whom I may have offended with the above HA! I say unto
thee this, sorry for the aforemoention HA!
Tomorrow's
exercise : “Day
9: Turn on your TV. Write down the first line that you hear and write
a story based on it.”
That got me thinking about a DAT in the life of The Alien.
ReplyDelete"Boring day. Cocooned some humans. Killed some that shot at me. Bit my tongue, which hurt like a bastard. Hang on, there's a human coming. She's got this weird looking gun with a flame on the end. I'm sure its nothing though."
See, point made - you totally humanised the villain and robbed him of all menace! Same could be done for Predator if Predator vs Alien didn't already exist! Or the knowledge that Jean Claude Van Damme was very nearly the vagina-faced monster!
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